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How's my driving?

Tell me what you think of Tabby. Is she good, bad, excruciatingly annoying? Maybe her reactions to things, or her in-jokes are confusing? Just leave a note and I'll explain everything you need to know!

All the comments are screened and if you wanna anon, that's cool too! IP logging's off after some struggling with the LJ settings 8D;

If you're going to anon, though, I'd appreciate if you could turn on thread tracking. I tend to ask a lot of questions in regards to crit and I get amazingly nervy when I'm stuck in that vague pit of "oh dear god, something's wrong, but I don't know how to fix it" and I can't get clarification.

That said, thanks so much for the crit!

WHO: Tabby and Elsa
WHERE: IDK Elsa's doorstep and then her apartment?
WHEN: IT'S AN AU 8D
SUMMARY: After this and this
WARNINGS: Zero and Toast being total retards 8D
FORMAT: WHATEVER WE FEEL LIKE YAYYYY

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